Copy Critiqueing and Editing

Get an expert second opinion on your  ad, letter or brochure plus get these 11 pieces of tactical advice for a very affordable price!

Kris, I am so happy for all your recent critiqueing. Our presentation packs NOW have the punch, zing even excitement blended with a human caring feeling your writing skills embody.

The introductory letters are expanding our technicians businesses almost effortlessly. You have a RARE GIFT, as a real professional communicator.

My staff are energised by the creative ideas you have provided us in the “Marketing and Advertising Toolkit”, it is a wealth of valuable information. The bottom line is our orders are flowing.

To find a person of your real skill, who will work on our business has been a crucial reason why our business is accelerating rapidly. PLUS the incredible value of your services has made the decisions to give you the go ahead, easy.

Thanks for all your magical work, so far (your write so well, it forces me to see items not written by you as 2nd rate).”

Warwick Lindsay – Duco Magic

We can cast an eye over your marketing piece and provide you with specific solutions to boost your results in 11 areas like:

  1. How powerful is your headline or opening paragraph and (if needed) how could it be improved?
  2. How persuasive is the copy and what (if anything) can be done to improve its selling power?
  3. How enticing is the offer and (if anything) what can be done to improve its power?
  4. How effectively it is reaching your target market/media?
  5. Is the strategy a powerful one or should you be taking a different approach?
  6. How can you improve the design and layout to boost readability AND visual appeal?
  7. Is now the right timing to achieve the results you’re looking for and if not, when would be better?
  8. Are you using the right appeal to best hit the hot buttons of your audience? If not, what “appeal” would work better?
  9. How powerful is the call to action and how can it be improved?
  10. Risk-reversal measures – how easy are you making it for your reader to buy and what can you do to remove the barriers to doing business?
  11. How well have you conveyed your point-of-difference in the material?

SAVE $97.00 Or More

We normally charge $250+GST for a critique however we have reduced our prices for a limited time so you’ll pay just $157 + GST per page (Australian) (around $US 140), and with that you’ll receive at least 11 specific pointers to enhance the sales power of your piece.

Please note that this isn’t a re-write — instead it’s a review which analyses the effectiveness of your material as it stands now. You are given specific advice on how to go about making improvements to the areas that we mention need work.

You’re receiving a comprehensive “audit” of your marketing piece for less than half the price we charge for writing a 1 page sales letter.

To arrange your critique, just fill out your details below. Once payment has been arranged you will be sent a confirmation email with instructions for sending the material to us. For emailed critiques there is a 36 hour turnaround and for faxed critiques allow 72 hours.

4 Packages To Choose From …

  • 1 critique of a 1 page sales letter, brochure or ad $A 175 +GST (SAVE $A 123)
  • 2 critiques of a 1 page sales letter, brochure or ad $A 280 + GST (SAVE $A 220)
  • 3 critiques $A 360 + GST (SAVE $A 390 … buy 2 get 1 FREE)
  • 4 critiques – $A 400 +GST (SAVE $A 600 )

We have set a strict “quota” for the number of critique packages we will sell at this price so please respond now to ensure you don’t miss out.

To arrange your critique, just press the button below and you will be taken through to our critique order form. We ask that payment be made in advance to secure a critique.

100% Money Back Guarantee

Your investment in the critique comes with a money back guarantee. If you’re not delighted with the advice you receive when we present you with the critique we’ll give you a full refund.

Credit The Full Amount Towards a Copywriting Project

If after having the critique done you decide you’d like us to rewrite your piece for you, we’ll put 100% of the critique amount towards the cost of copywriting.

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